
My Entry for In Vino Veritas Contest
She had surely felt the adoration in his stare, for that is where her eyes stopped wandering.
The server handed her the drink he had requested. Incidently, the wine was the color of her lips. Her fingers circled the rim of the glass delicately as she contemplated. Then, she decisively motioned him to join her.
Once the initial moments of uncertainty passed, he easily immersed himself into the role of a charismatic prospect.
The conversation flowed. He imagined her tied to the bed, her protests ranging from loud threats to whimpers. His excitement increased exponentially.
He dropped the capsule into the drink just before the last few sips. A flick of the wrist, his favorite magic trick. He paid the bill and patiently watched her down the last few drops.
Her back felt warm as he guided her out. The parking lot was dark. The night, moonless. A few more steps and he would have a new instrument for his concerto.
Suddenly, the world tilted at an impossible angle. Pain seared through his body. His own cries unnatural to his ears. Dust clouded around him where he fell. His mouth contorted with realization.
" You … the glasses !! "
She bent over him. Her eyes sparkled with a vindication, " I even added another party treat. I‘m not surprised you forgot me. Never did believe in Karma, did you? Well, joke’s on you ! "
The receding noise of her heels were the final notes of his symphony.
22 comments:
I was wondering, Where is this lady going, because the obvious storyline would have been her fainting, a tried and tested storyline, but the revenge, wow what a twist, nice!
Ahan nice one.I'll read other two and post on the last one as to which one i liked most :)
Nice! Saw it coming, but the words used are phenomenal! Mesmerizing prose, Adisha!
Wow!!...What a story of revenge...
Great description of events..simply awesome...
Nice... appropriate entry, I must add... :)
the story has a great twist! gud goin!
aha! good one gal!
Revenge is always sweet! :d
Cheers
CRD
justice delivered.....
The woman was a superwoman i guess...
Anyways..
all the best for the contest..
hope u win it... :)
Hi Adisha, just wanted to thank you so much for your comments on my blog, and to say hello! I really enjoyed your piece very much and I'm glad to meet you!
Amazing story!! Loved the end! Blogrolling you.
Thank you so much all , for reading And for commenting :)
@ Catvibe - Welcome to my blog. Hope I see more of you here :) Glad to meet you too ...
@ Nupur - Thanks. Keep visiting :)
wow what a twist! Nice one Adisha.
btw come n solve some riddles in my blog ;-)
Keshi.
ur story telling is really amazing ...
Wow...awesome story! Twisty..! you write well!!
Stunner!!
Tat twist was jus kewll...
Enjoyed it..
All the best for your Entry - Hope u will finish up with another win!!!
Cheers...
like d way u write,
gr8!!
Oh Good!
What goes around does come around, then! I really love it when women pay it back to sick men in kind (with interest)!
Nice 'Party Treat', this!
Nice twist , good luck for the competition,
hey, the twist in the tale was something better than usual and i liked it. Good writing and keep it up
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hey adisha,
dont knw its wid age or practice, u r gttin more phenomenal day by day!!!
keep it up..
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