The shot rang out - a loud crack!
Drops fell. Slowly at first, gaining strength. Everyone froze in response to accident.
She stood paralyzed as she saw death rushing to envelope her. Within seconds, the drizzle transformed into screams of despair.
She filled her lungs with air, praying they wouldn't be buried too deep by the avalanche.
Feb 23, 2010
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4 comments:
hey liked it..try and hold the suspense till the end :)
i felt this could have been longer. good work btw :)
short. crsip. beautiful. wish to read more from you.
love.
good one...and u did it in 55! :)
Cheers
CRD
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