Feb 23, 2010

Trigger - 55 Fiction

The shot rang out - a loud crack!

Drops fell. Slowly at first, gaining strength. Everyone froze in response to accident.

She stood paralyzed as she saw death rushing to envelope her. Within seconds, the drizzle transformed into screams of despair.

She filled her lungs with air, praying they wouldn't be buried too deep by the avalanche.

4 comments:

ani_aset said...

hey liked it..try and hold the suspense till the end :)

Shruti Narayanan said...

i felt this could have been longer. good work btw :)

S A J I T H said...

short. crsip. beautiful. wish to read more from you.
love.

CRD said...

good one...and u did it in 55! :)


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CRD

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